From 858e4e6227e192c8d9efc4140fb91603d2d85657 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ed Ward <edwsaintesprit@hotmail.com>
Date: Wed, 28 Mar 2018 14:19:23 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] More small updates

---
 include/balance-control.html    | 13 +++++++++----
 include/mono-panner.html        |  5 ++---
 include/muting-and-soloing.html | 34 ++++++++++++++++++++-------------
 include/panning.html            |  5 ++---
 4 files changed, 34 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-)

diff --git a/include/balance-control.html b/include/balance-control.html
index 6b61b36..eb8632e 100644
--- a/include/balance-control.html
+++ b/include/balance-control.html
@@ -1,11 +1,17 @@
 
 <p>
-  For stereo tracks, you can now switch between the default stereo panner
+  For stereo tracks, it is possible to switch between the default stereo panner
   and a traditional <dfn>balance control</dfn> by right-clicking on the
   panner widget.
 </p>
-<img class="left" src="/images/stereo-balance.png" alt="Stereo Balance
-control"/>
+
+<figure class="left">
+  <img src="/images/stereo-balance.png" alt="Stereo Balance control">
+  <figcaption>
+    Stereo Balance control
+  </figcaption>
+</figure>
+
 <p>
   When the balance is centered, the incoming signals will be unaffected.
   Moving it to one side will linearly attenuate the signal of the opposite
@@ -16,4 +22,3 @@ control"/>
   panner, it works with arbitrary content without danger of introducing
   comb filter artefacts.
 </p>
-
diff --git a/include/mono-panner.html b/include/mono-panner.html
index 8d7e950..95196a1 100644
--- a/include/mono-panner.html
+++ b/include/mono-panner.html
@@ -29,8 +29,8 @@ default, the panner is centered.
 <h2>Using the mouse</h2>
 
 <p>To change the position smoothly, press the right button and drag
-  anywhere within the panner. <em>Note: you do not need
-  to grab the position indicator in order to drag</em>
+  anywhere within the panner. <em>Note: grabbing the position indicator is not
+  needed in order to drag.</em>
 </p>
 
 <table class="dl">
@@ -83,4 +83,3 @@ wheel may be used as follows:
   <tr><th><kbd class="mod1 mouse">&dArr;</kbd> or <kbd class="mod1 mouse">&rArr;</kbd></th>
   <td>move position to the right by 5&deg;</td></tr>
 </table>
-
diff --git a/include/muting-and-soloing.html b/include/muting-and-soloing.html
index 5b68537..c5f8afd 100644
--- a/include/muting-and-soloing.html
+++ b/include/muting-and-soloing.html
@@ -8,12 +8,12 @@
 
 <h2>Without a monitor bus</h2>
 <p>
-  If you are using Ardour without a monitor bus, there is only one way
+  When using Ardour without a monitor bus, there is only one way
   in which mute and solo will work:</p>
 <ul>
   <li>
     Mute on a track or bus will mute that track on the master bus,
-     so that it will not be heard.
+    so that it will not be heard.
   </li>
   <li>
     Solo on a track or bus will solo that track or bus and mute all
@@ -24,10 +24,10 @@
 
 <h2>With a monitor bus</h2>
 <p>
-  For setups with a monitor bus, you have more options, mostly
+  For setups with a monitor bus, more options are available, mostly
   governed by the setting of the
   <kbd class="option">Solo controls are Listen controls</kbd> option
-  in <kbd class="menu">Edit &gt; Preferences &gt; Solo / mute.
+  in <kbd class="menu">Edit &gt; Preferences &gt; Mixer.</kbd>
 </p>
 <p>
   With <kbd class="optoff">Solo controls are Listen controls</kbd>
@@ -36,11 +36,11 @@
   bus is fed from the master bus, so it sees the same thing.
 </p>
 <p>
-  With <kbc class="option">Solo controls are Listen controls</kbd>
+  With <kbd class="option">Solo controls are Listen controls</kbd>
   ticked, the master and monitor busses behave differently. In this
   mode, solo controls are more properly called <dfn>listen</dfn>
   controls, and Ardour's solo buttons will change their legend from
-  <samp>S</samp> to either <samp>A</samp> or <samp>P</samp> to
+  <kbd class="menu">S</kbd> to either <kbd class="menu">A</kbd> or <kbd class="menu">P</kbd> to
   reflect this.
 </p>
 <p>
@@ -69,7 +69,12 @@
 <p>
   The solo-mute arrangement with a monitor bus is shown below:
 </p>
-<img src="/images/solo-mute.png" alt="mute/solo signal flow" />
+
+<figure class="center">
+  <img src="/images/solo-mute.png" alt="mute/solo signal flow">
+  <figcaption>Mute/solo signal flow</figcaption>
+</figure>
+
 <p>
   Here we have a number of tracks or busses (in orange). Each one has an
   output which feeds the master bus. In addition, each has PFL and AFL
@@ -85,7 +90,7 @@
 
 <h2>Other solo options</h2>
 <p>
-  <kbd class="menu">Edit &gt; Preferences &gt;  Solo / Mute</kbd> has some
+  <kbd class="menu">Edit &gt; Preferences &gt;  Mixer</kbd> has some
   more solo options:
 </p>
 
@@ -100,31 +105,34 @@
   larger than -&infin;&nbsp;dB is sometimes called "Solo-In-Front" by other DAWs, because
   the listener has the sense that soloed material is "in front" of other
   material. In Ardour, this is not a distinct mode, but instead the mute cut
-  control offers any level of "in-front-ness" that you might want to use.
+  control offers any level of "in-front-ness" that is desired.
 </p>
+
 <h3>Exclusive solo</h3>
 <p>
   If this is enabled, only one track or bus will ever be soloed at once; soloing
   track B while track A is currently soloed will un-solo track A before soloing
   track B.
 </p>
+
 <h3>Show solo muting</h3>
 <p>
   If this is enabled, the mute button of tracks and busses will be drawn
   outlined to indicate that the track or bus is muted because something else
-  is soloed. This is enabled by default, and we recommend that you leave it
-  that way unless you are extremely comfortable with Ardour's mute/solo
+  is soloed. This is enabled by default, and it is recommended to leave it
+  that way unless extremely comfortable with Ardour's mute/solo
   behaviour.
 </p>
+
 <h3>Soloing overrides muting</h3>
 <p>
   If this is enabled, a track or bus that is both soloed and muted will behave
   as if it is soloed.
 </p>
-<h3>Mute affects…</h3>
+
+<h3>Mute affects&hellip;</h3>
 <p>
   These options dictate whether muting the track will affect various routes out
   of the track; through the sends, through the control outputs (to the monitor
   bus) and to the main outputs.
 </p>
-
diff --git a/include/panning.html b/include/panning.html
index 8a81a8b..597edbe 100644
--- a/include/panning.html
+++ b/include/panning.html
@@ -7,8 +7,8 @@
 </p>
 <p>
   It is used to create a sense of space and/or a sense of motion in an
-  audio mix. You can spread out different signals across the space, and
-  make them move over time.
+  audio mix. Different signals can be spread out across the space, and
+  moved over time.
 </p>
 
 <h2>Types of Panners</h2>
@@ -39,4 +39,3 @@
   In addition to the panners, Ardour has a balance control for subtle
   corrections to existing stereo images.
 </p>
-